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Firstly, I learned that its better to draw your pictures for your project instead of getting them off of the internet because when you take photos off of the internet you have to source the picture, so when you take the photos off of the internet it basically saying its your work when you don’t source it. Secondly,When I read my feedback I learned that I could of been louder and had more eye contact, also I could of engaged the audience by walking around and pointing to the pictures that I drew of the 5 kingdoms and asking the class some questions. Thirdly, what I would do differently is I would speak louder and have more eye contact and next time I would of gone above and beyond by making a poster and a power point. I also would of cut out my boarders more straight. I also would of engaged the Audience by asking them some questions like Are monera’s multicelluar or unicelluar? so then they would of been more engaged instead of bored. I also would of made my title more straight by accident I put the title a little crooked. Another thing I would of added is my bibliography I have my bibliography but I didn’t glue it on my poster because there wasn’t enough room on my poster I could of glued it on the back but I thought that it would look better if I just hung it on the front of the poster with clips, also I wouldn’t put  tape on my project for the next project because when I put tape on my project it didn’t give it that look I thought it would look. I would improve on my spacing because it doesn’t look like I spaced it out enough. One more thing I would improve on is the examples of each kingdom because I didn’t include the examples of each kingdom in my paragraph. I think that I could of made the title bigger. Those are the things I think I could improve on!

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