You page is looking good :)
I found a few mistakes that can be easily fixed.
Spelling: you spelled some things wrong like "dreser" should be "denser".
Grammar: I found a few mistakes, one example is in my punctuation feedback.
Punctuation: I found some mistakes with punctuation such as this; you wrote "is called a Subduction subductionzones" you should take away the capital "S" in subduction and put a period between subduction and subduction zones then give subduction zones a capital "S". Lastly in the word "subductionzones" put a space between "subduction" and ''zones". In the end it should look like this "is called a subduction. Subduction zones"
Capitals: I found a few missing capitals. For example you need to capitalize B.C. as it is a specific place.
Media: you need pictures for each section.
Also "convergent boundary" should be under "the structure of the earth" not "bibliography"
Good job overall :)
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Oreo
1/3/2012 07:40:09 am
Spelling: You have 1 spelling mistakes the word you spelled wrong had to be spelled like this denser.
Grammer: on a few sentences you have a grammer mistake but not many.
Media: you might want to add a picture or a video on this page and a lot of other sections do to.
Capitals: You have one place were you need a capital like B.C.
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Oreo
1/3/2012 07:41:11 am
Almost forgot you are doing a great Job on your website so far. :) :)
your website is really good. i think you should change some of the pictures for the subject because most of them are all the same with just a different title but ether than that i thought it was amuzing i really liked it
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